· 2 reviews · [ Harry Potter ] · by Lightning on the Wave
mature · completed · 81k words · updated 13 years ago
AU, eventual HPDM slash, very Slytherin!Harry. Harry's twin Connor is the Boy Who Lived, and Harry is devoted to protecting him by making himself look ordinary. But certain people won't let Harry stay in the shadows... COMPLETE
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Cool concept, with a single glaring flaw...
anathea | 3 months ago

I like everything about this fic, except the way that Draco Malfoy is written. He is so immensely irritating in this that I literally had to rage quit. If he were a villain, it would be one thing, but he's supposed to be a good guy! The pairing is HP/DM! But he's the worst little shit, who treats Harry incredibly badly, and Harry just... takes it. I wish wish wish I could overlook this because I really do like everything else about this fic so much, but every time Draco is on screen (which is a lot) I just get so frustrated.

A classic with amazing worldbuilding
propensity | 4 months ago

It's been a while since I've read this story, but I would consider it a classic of the fandom. At times the relationships and fic overall were a bit too angsty for my taste, but the story was overall excellent. The plot, characters, and especially the worldbuilding were amazing.