I think the problem with this fic is that it fills the prompt, but there's nothing more to it. The writing is functional, but not terribly engaging. There's a few cute details in there, but the whole thing seems rather cliche. There's also no particular theme to the story. There's no sense of randomness, because we know the waitress is going to pick up Mjolnir. There's no theorizing as to why she picks up the hammer. And I think that's okay. AvengerKink prompts aren't always about the best fill, sometimes it's just about realizing the idea. I think if you like the idea, you'll be fine to read this fic.
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