This is one of the best gamer Jaune fics I've read so far. Probably the best, actually. It has some novel ideas on Jaune's progress and mechanics, has excellent pacing - the author gets more done in 94k words than some do in 200k, and has some great genre-savvy humor. It diverges significantly from canon, and that's a good thing. The author is not afraid to experiment and has a lot of cool ideas I hope to see finalized if he continues this story.