· 3 reviews · [ RWBY The Gamer ] · by Roguehunter11
mature · ongoing · 94k words · updated 1 year ago
The Grimm closed in, as the ember in his soul shivered and then surged forth, burning irrepressibly as he faced death once more. "It's going to be a long night" The 9-year-old murmured, his tone quivering in a manner that might have been mistaken for terror… if not for the nigh maniacal grin stretched across his face "Well, just another dance at death's border, I guess" Gamer!Jaune
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A great litrpg with a very young Jaune
DuskStar | 5 months ago
Novel approach with great pacing
elfensky | 5 months ago

This is one of the best gamer Jaune fics I've read so far. Probably the best, actually. It has some novel ideas on Jaune's progress and mechanics, has excellent pacing - the author gets more done in 94k words than some do in 200k, and has some great genre-savvy humor. It diverges significantly from canon, and that's a good thing. The author is not afraid to experiment and has a lot of cool ideas I hope to see finalized if he continues this story.

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DuskStar | 5 months ago

The fictionpress.com link does not work, probably due to it being the same ID as the fanfiction.net link.