This fic is really fun, though the dark moments can sometimes be a little jarring when compared to the generally upbeat and cute tone. I wish it had been continued until the end, but what we got is still really fun!
The fic depicts things that should be by all rights horrifying (demon summoning, binding promises) in a lighthearted, almost cutesy way - which is actually a part of what makes it so entertaining. Hermione summons hellish horrors because she's lonely and wants company. Love it! But while she seems like a good child with a strong sense of what's right and wrong, the fic never explores her descent into darkness or struggles with morality. She never even considers that she made a mistake. While she flirts with being "evil", it's only in the last chapter that she does truly heinous things, and it's simply summarized in a few paragraphs. Maybe it's for the best that the fic ends before the disconnect between the lighthearted tone and the dark themes could become too jarring.
It's a clever sort of funny that doesn't sacrifice on meanings. Heed the tags though, this fic will not interest everyone.
The story is a little short, but every moment is enjoyable. It presents an entirely different wizarding world which I only wish I could have continued to read about. However, as it was it was still a marvellously inventive and convincing narrative which I would thoroughly recommend to future readers.
A delightful read, even though I feel it falls short of greatness. A bit more length and depth could have made this magnificent.
Short, but very cool concept. Has a very powerful Hermione in this. Writing is good.
This was just a delightful story. The ending was lacking, though. I felt the story had so much more to give. A young Hermione (prior to Hogwarts age) learns how to summon demons from a library book.