I really wanted to like it, but it was messily put together. The tone didn't know how to set its self. There was no clear genre 9rbtgeme. And the way characters were killed off seemed lazily done, and there was a lack of significant characters.
My only criticism is the fact that it really could have done with one more epilogue to tie up Hinata's character arc on screen, instead of simply suggesting it. It is a rational fic though, so I sometimes got tired of reading about robots. It does pull off the "clever worldbuilding and fights" aspect of rational fics quite well.
Despite plot-armor, it it a well executed story of a book-smarts Naruto who abuses shadow-clones for book-and-other-smarts. It's an entertaining look at a more realistic and harsh reality of a warring ninja world. It adds some interesting world-building and changes that, frankly, make a lot of sense and in general ends up being a fairly unique view of the Elemental Nations.
It's bootstrapping to godhood, but if you don't mind that ist great.